I know when the end is coming
It creeps in, swallows your breath,
And leaves you gasping for air
That is thin and owns no name
The sound of your bones
Cracking
Wakes you from
A deep sleep
The tosses and turns
Cease
Water on your nightstand
Fills the pools in your eyes
Death by submersion
A Cornered Gurl 
How do you do that? Make even drowning an eloquent experience for the reader. Kudos, my friend!!
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I wish I knew, Deb! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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The mistress of word strikes again ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
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Hey! Hey, you! 💙 Thank you.
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Lord. Again. Right to the heart. Beautiful. 💙
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Thank you.
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Very powerful
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Hey, you. Thank you very much!
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Sounds dreadful!
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😞
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Of course, I was referring to death by submersion being dreadful, NOT your writing. ♥♥
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Lol. I know. I was agreeing with that emoji. Lol. 💙
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