an experimental audio poem

I feel her
crying soul
letting go — we’re
breaking free from
the chains we
formed around us.
breathing is like fighting
under water — struggling to
pull against every push.
I tell her “I am here” when
her mind strangles her.
I am ready to save
her from the darkness.
my friend says to me,
“I could never say no to
something like this… the way
you poured your heart out, Tre.
the way you wear your heart
on your sleeve.
if I were her, it’d be a “Yes.”
and I don’t think
people get the crux of us — the
history. we have been
sacred for years; subordinate
to manager, there were just
some roads we couldn’t
cross, and now that we have
this cross to bear, it’s
more jigsawed than ever before.
still…
I feel her
crying soul
letting go — we’re
breaking free from
the chains we
formed around us.
we were made to
move.
Author’s Note: This piece began as a bit of micropoetry I shared as a note on my Substack. I wanted to play around with it and see what else I could produce. The photo above of me helped with this process. The thoughts bouncing about in my mind needed formulating — they needed a home. I think I have found one for them.
Have you gotten your copy of my new book: a collection of serial tales & flash fiction, Séduire (E-Book and Paperback) yet?
I recently signed up to write on Substack as well. Poking the Bear’s Belly for Fun is a place of healing as I speak about the most recent events with my place of employment as it pertains to racism and discrimination. I welcome your visit.
Peace and Blessings!
This is so wonderful Tre!
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Hey, there! Thank you! ❤️💜🩵
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Well said and beautifully composed trE! 🤗💖😊 I loved what you shared, and unapologetically my friend. 🙌🏼
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Thank you kindly. 🙏🏾💜
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My pleasure always sistah! 🥰🙏🏼💐
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Hmmm… I sat in the emotions in this read Tre. So many layers. Your voice sounded like plucked strings. It still flowed.. the melody transportive.. the emotions conveyed in pitch and delivery.
Loved it.
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Thank you kindly, Nigel. I truly appreciate it.
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You’re welcome, my dear.
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I like your style. Every time I am like I need to do more and don’t, I see your post and you are just freaking doing it. Just incredible!
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Thank you kindly! We just gotta go for it, you know? Do the damn thing so we can root for you, too! 🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾
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Your thoughts bounced most effectively.
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Thank you, Peggy. I was a bit worried about this one. I chopped it up in good fashion, but landed on what you see before you. I am happy it works. 🙏🏽💙
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Feeling this one Tre 👏👏
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Thank you! 🙏🏾🩵
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Truly a great piece.
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Thank you, Petru. 🙏🏾🩵
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Your experimental audio is splendid dear trE. A beautiful poem. Thank you
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Thank you very much for reading and listening, Selma. 🙏🏾🩵
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TrE, “breathing is like fighting / under water” is such a gripping metaphor—it pulled me under in the best way!
~David
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Thank you, David! I’m glad that line resonated with you. 🙏🏾🩵
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🤗
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*Big hugs* Of late, I truly appreciate a good hug.
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