NaPoWriMo #1
waking up to another day
the body wants to remain
plastered to a pillow top – the
mind longs to power down.
speaking to the beast
gives me hives, and I’d
rather stay at home where
dreams don’t come alive
with the intent to strangle
me.
every new day is an opportunity
for the beast to build another
house of lies.
I have grown tired of
shapeshifting and code-switching,
shadowboxing my way to peace.
Love the fire in this one… and how you took it to a crescendo. Annoyed? Frustrated? I’m not sure, but it reminds me of ma putting her foot down. Don’t wanna mess with a woman in this mood.
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“Don’t wanna mess with a woman in this mood.” BAYBAY!!! And don’t!
I have good news about it all but I’ll be sharing it soon.
Thank you for reading, Nigel. 🙏🏾🩵
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Preach! I’m glad you’re doing NaPoWriMo this year, but I wish you didn’t have to write poems like this. And yet, here we are.
Love the strength of your voice though. We’re not licked yet!
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Hey, you! Thank you very much! Nope, they haven’t gotten us to be down and out yet! You’re correct!
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Shadow boxing is a perfect description.
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Thank you, Peggy!
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Well said. 💗
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Thank you.
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You’re most welcome.
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Excellent build-up to those last two lines. 👏🏻
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Thank you very much, Michele! 🙏🏾🩵
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Thank you! 🙌🏻
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You’re most welcome!
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Wow, so powerful 🫶👏👏
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Thank you for reading! 🙏🏾🩵
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Hives (lol), so do I! This is genius poetry! Happy April ~ ❤
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Thank you for reading! Happy April to you as well! 😊
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Powerful lines Tre !
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Thank you very much, Maggie! I appreciate it!
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My pleasure always Tre
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Very powerful and well said!
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Thank you kindly!
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