The night sky winks
At the purple moon.
October is almost in
The rearview and November
Waits with bated breath.
The dog stretches in her bed.
She kicks her back leg out,
Wiggles her creaking body,
And turns over to another set
Of dreams.
The TV is background noise
While I give birth to
Two poems, microfiction,
And a lamentation that’s been
Trapped in my heart for a week.
Monday is around the corner,
Shaking its head at the job
Ahead of it–it loathes us just
As much as we do it.
Sunday kicks its feet up,
Positions itself comfortably
On my couch, and kisses the
Night goodbye.
Tomorrow, I’ll be drowning
In headaches of the pre-meditated
Kind–they’ve been
Waiting for me to clock in.
Beautifully captures that bittersweet Sunday evening feeling that so many of us know too well. I dig how you personify both Sunday and Monday, giving them distinct personalities – Sunday lounging comfortably on the couch while Monday waits with a sense of dread. The image of the pupper turning over “to another set of dreams” adds such a tender, domestic touch that makes the scene feel incredibly real and lived-in.
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Thank you very much for this feedback! I appreciate you!
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My pleasure. The appreciation is mutual.
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Lovely poem Tre.. the previous post..💔💔.. talk about plucking on my heartstrings. Have a blessed weekend my dear.
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Thank you, Nigel.
Eh, “It is what it is”, as the young ones say, right?
🙏🏾💙
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That’s one lucky pup dog, trE💕
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🙏🏾💙 Thank you!
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🙏🏼💓🙏🏼
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Great poem trE!
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Thank you!
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You’re most welcome.
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Jernee is living the life!!! Great poem Tre
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Child, she sure is. Lol
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LOL
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I love the idea of Jernee turning over to another set of dreams. May hers, and yours, be wonderful!
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Thank you, Peter. Thank you. 🙏🏾💙
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I am feeling this one this morning.
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🙏🏾💙 I hope Thursday will be kind to you and that next Monday will be, too.
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This is so relatable, Tre
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I am both happy and sad that you can relate. Thank you for reading.
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The pleasure is mine 🙂
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Your words glide off the page and I am right there with you and the dog and your newly created poems. It is always a joy to read you, Tre.
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Hello, there! Thank you for stopping by! 🙏🏾💙
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Here’s hoping Monday is kind to you.
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I hope it will be next week. It definitely wasn’t this week. 🤣😆😂
Thank you!
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🙏🏽💕
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