You
reduced me to dirt,
particles–grains of sand.
I guess
walking all over me
feels much better than
loving
me.
16 thoughts on “Reduction”
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You
reduced me to dirt,
particles–grains of sand.
I guess
walking all over me
feels much better than
loving
me.
Comments are closed.
This was something very different and yet perfectly related to. The choice of words are wonderful and makes everything seem so realistic. Love is beautifully portrayed. What a masterpiece!!
You are welcome miss/Mrs/Mr
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Thank you and I appreciate your comment. And it’s “Ms.” Peace.
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Thanks Β Β for liking my post on
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You’re most welcome.
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You are welcome dear friend. My pleasure to meet you
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Thanks Β Β for accepting and following my blog.
I’m available to read your post at my convenient time.
You have such an interesting topic I will love to read in
your blog.
I still remain Β the simple blogger…..
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Thank you and you’re welcome. Be well. Thank you for stopping by. Peace.
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You are welcome dear friend. My pleasure to meet you
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Thank you! I appreciate your thoughtful response.
Such an awesome way of replying someone. Thanks. Again
Also, I just posted:
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Would love to know your views. Love to see your contributions on it. Iβm always excited for your comment. π
You are welcome
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Oh dear. My heart aches reading this.
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Uh-oh – Xx
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Reduced to a thing. G:(
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Exactly.
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Ouch! This packs a punch.
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π It is pretty gritty.
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