Two poems shared on Substack notes
catastrophic love
his blithesome
demeanor captured
me.
I lost all of my
selves swimming
in the depths of his
eyes.
I was disruption;
a distraction…
we bombed before
we could elevate.
catastrophic love.
have we come far enough?
although I am the
eldest child, if this
were the 1500s or
I was of royal blood,
my arrival to first
would mean
nothing because the
next born has the
package; male
primogeniture cut me
to the quick.
imagine being the
first, most
dependable, always
responsible, and a
doer without being
prompted, yet your
earned position in
life depends on
what’s between your
legs.
that’s not a life I
would have enjoyed
living, but when I
assess modern
times and the fight
women constantly
battle, the system
is still rigged to
embrace the least
educated, the most
aggressive, and the
overly-praised, so…
how far have we
come, really?
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We’re actually going in reverse… and WAY too fast.
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We really are, and it’s frightening!
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Not as far as we should have.
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I agree, Peggy. I agree. 🙏🏾🩵
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How far have we come, really? Not far.
How come I never see these poems on Substack???
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They’re in notes. I post them as notes and not in my actual publication. 🤣😂😆 https://substack.com/@treisthename/note/c-147033471
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At the risk of sounding like an elder 🙄 do I have to physically go to your notes 😬
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😂🤣😆
No, you can just go to my profile and the “Activity” tab has the most recent activity from/restacked by me on there.
Hmm. You don’t spend much time rummaging through all the goodies on the”Home” screen for Substack, do you?! The daily notes are STUPENDOUS flooding my feed from the writers I follow.
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Chile. I have been outed lol
Issa lot going on over there 😂
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Lol. Lol. “Take what you need, leave the rest.”
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🤦🏽♀️🤣
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