Two poems written on Substack notes

first world problems
I awoke to no hot water
again today. it went on strike
yesterday afternoon, and this
morning, I’d had it.
a work order was requested,
and within an hour, maintenance
rapped at my door.
ten minutes later, hot water
was roaring from the faucets.
how easy it was for me to
forget the luxuriousness of
something so simple that
took almost no time to
fix.
first world problems aren’t
as big as we make them
out to be, so why do
we spend time doing so?

mother’s curbed anger
my mom has denounced her
pugilistic ways,
choosing to engage
in reasonable debate
instead.
as a girlchild who
witnessed her
violent side more
than I can count,
I learned that her
anger lived in me,
too.
what I had to relearn
was: being provoked will always
spark in-depth angst,
but the decision to
breathe through it,
and “make good
choices” can
actually save my life.
Have you gotten your copy of my new book: a collection of serial tales & flash fiction, Séduire (E-Book and Paperback) yet?
I recently signed up to write on Substack as well. Poking the Bear’s Belly for Fun is a place of healing as I speak about the most recent events with my place of employment as it pertains to racism and discrimination. I welcome your visit.
They keep rolling in around here and touché to you for continuing to choose how you want to show up!
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WOW trE, I love the interwoven components of two contrasting subjects. Yes girl, breathe through it because you will get through it. 🥰🤜🏼🤛🏼😍
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Amen! Thank you! There are so many other pressing issues in this world. 🙏🏾🩵
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Girl, don’t even talk about it. I feel like I am back in the Twilight Zone sometimes! 😣😱🙄
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🤣😂😆
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Hey trE, I really appreciate how both of these poems quietly unpack what it means to choose our responses—whether to cold water or inherited anger. There’s something powerful in the way you show that ease and peace aren’t automatic but are decisions we have to keep making.
Much love,
David
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Thank you, David! Yes, sir. Every single day, there’s some form of a test for us to either pass or fail.
I appreciate you reading and commenting.
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We’re having a couple of first world problems—a leaky roof and a blocked toilet. Too much water.
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Ugh! I hope they’re both resolved for you guys soon!
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