Flash Fiction response to Melissa’s Fandango Flash Fiction Prompt

Mr. Doyle lives across the street from us. He’s an older guy with wiry fire for hair in a golden rage. My mom hates him… says he’s on some sort of in-house arrest for his past following him all the way here. I don’t know what she’s talking about, but I like Mr. Doyle. He has this lisp that I bet could scale a ladder quicker than The Flash. I have tea and danishes with him twice per week. He paints nature–makes it pop.
Today’s piece is a chipmunk sipping from the tiniest teacup I’ve ever seen. He also has a rather fat blueberry on a plate in front of the chipmunk. “A proper breakfast”, I comment. Because who wouldn’t want tea and blueberries?!
He tells me he’s titling the painting The Beauty of Voyeurism, and I sit back on the green, crunchy cushions of his couch, swirl the name around in my mouth. I like it. But . . . “Why voyeurism? Isn’t this a more sexually derived term for being too nosy and too into what you’re snooping up on?”
Mr. Doyle rolls back and forth on the heels of his feet, nods his contemplative head, and shouts in my direction, “YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY CORRECT, SAM! If you notice, the chipmunk is focused, entirely too focused on the tea. The blueberry is lonely. It would like some of that attention, too. But the chipmunk has become enticed by, influenced by the deliciousness of the tea–so much so that its pleasure has been satiated by the tea alone.”
I know I ain’t the brightest crayon in the box, but I know at this point, exactly what Mom was talking about when she said Mr. Doyle has a past following him. I get up from the couch, grab my windbreaker, thank Mr. Doyle for the tea and danish, and high-tail it across the street.
Ain’t no way I’m telling Mom about this. NO WAY at all!
This flash fiction piece was written in response to Melissa’s Fandango Flash Fiction Challenge. Maybe you’d like to give it a go as well? Here’s hoping your mind doesn’t take you to where my mind took me. It was a fun write, nonetheless, though.
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Séduire part II 👀
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Ah . . . I’m working on the second book of fiction, but it’s DEF not titled Séduire II. 😂🤣😆
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LOLOL
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nice
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Oh the things we never tell our moms!
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Ha! She learned a valuable lesson!
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Gotcha!
I tend to ignore certain details and try to see the positives about people. I guess I missed the ankle bracelet somewhere but I do remember the mother’s warning.
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The ankle bracelet is implied because he was on in-house arrest. 🙏🏾🩵
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I guess I’m slow, Tre because I don’t get it. Why is he views as bad news with a bad past?
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He’s a pedophile.
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I guess I’m gonna have to have my husband read it and tell me why, I read it twice and still don’t get it.
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Look up the word voyeurism, start there. Typically pedophiles gravitate toward children; teenagers and build bonds and relationships with them before they sexually molest/abuse them.
Sam’s mother’s warning of Mr. Doyle’s past following him and the ankle bracelet for house arrest is another clue. Word got around town about who he is.
The way he described the chipmunk’s fixation with the tea and even expressing to a child that he’s titling his painting “The Beauty of Voyeurism” are all clues that this guy is bad news.
Sam finally realizes it and high-tails it up outta there.
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Very imaginative 🤗❤️ fun to read
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Thank you kindly.
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Mr. Doyle sounds like he got a bad box of crayons.😬
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Yup! He’s not good peoples after all. 😩
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Get outta there, Sam! And keep those blinds closed. 😂
I liked your take on the prompt.
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Haha. Thank you!
That’s right! She needs to stay far away from him! But she had to learn on her own. Teenagers. *Sighs*
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Sometimes that’s the only way to learn! I know I’ve been there! 🤣
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Child, me too! 🤣😂😆
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