Lune #8 of 25
if I hung the moon
you’d notice
my heart is there too
*A lune (rhymes with moon) is a very short poem. It has only three lines. It is similar to a haiku. A haiku has three lines, and it follows a 5/7/5 syllable pattern. The lune’s syllable pattern is 5/3/5. Since the middle line is limited to three syllables, it is often the shortest line of the three. This makes a lune curve a bit like a crescent moon.
For the next twenty-five days, except Saturdays and Sundays, I will share a lune with each of you. This is Lune #8 of this project.
Town quiet’s under
Starry skies
Positano rests.
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Kim, this is really good!
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Thanks, Tre-yours was better but then, you’re a seasoned pro!
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I wouldn’t say all that, ma’am! Lol. Not at all. I love that you’re responding and trying them out. You’re really good at them!
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Aww, shucks. Now I’m blushing ☺️
Hey, about my dogs…Brandy tolerates the cat, most of the time she’s really hateful and grouchy towards her. Must have been a cold night and they decided they could get along for a bit.
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Haha. Okay then. That explains a lot. Lol.
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I love this piece. Bravo.
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Thank you!
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My pleasure.
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Beautiful!!! You’re making me miss haikus now….🤗❤️😊
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Haha. I love haiku as well, but I have gained an incredible amount of respect for the lune. Thank you for reading.
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