scraping against an
old wound reminded me
of forgotten sorrows we visit
when time stands still
rumor has it that
a stubborn woman
landed in the selfish
lap of a has-been hero
and begged him to
be something else
the burning in his
chest wrapped itself
around his heart
no one knows him well
enough to bury him
19 thoughts on “burning”
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Great work! One of your best!
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Thank you, Bart, I appreciate that! ππΎπ
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Whoa trE, all I can say is drop the mic girl! π€π€π€ WOW, a foolish and burning heart ππ₯π…girl, this is deep, deep, deep!
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Haha. Thank you! I appreciate this! ππΎππΎππΎ
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No problem girlfriend. My pleasure. π₯°ππΌπ€© Keep pumping the verses! βπΌ
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Oh wow, I’ll try not to think of old wounds.
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Oh wow that was deep!
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Thank you, Bella.
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You’re welcome!
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I needed to linger on your first stanza. You’ve given us a lot to think about with this excellent write!
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Thank you, Michele! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Very much! Thank you, trE. π»
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Wow, that was sad yet deep at the same time!
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Thank you for reading.
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Por supuesto!
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