a tanka

On some mornings, I reminisce while I’m cooking; I think about him, think about her, and then I move on.
*For those of you who might be wondering about the non-traditional usage of the form: I went with 5-7-5-7-5 instead of 5-7-5-7-7 syllables for this one. Also, it’s about food & love; not your typical tanka subjects. Sometimes for literary art, you’ve gotta be a bit of a rebel.
I’m on my way if that’s what you are cooking!
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Haha. That’s what I cooked and it’s been gone, boo! Lol. Lol.
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Dang it! LOL
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Lol!
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A delicious tanka.
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🙏🏾💙
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Nice rebelling!
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Haha! Thank you, Peter!
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my impression is that tankas can be about anything, pretty much – no holds barred! 😀
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Haha. Purists would NOT agree, but purists/traditionalists, we are NOT.
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🤷🏻♂️
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I’m a rebel myself! Good job on the tanka!
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Thank you!
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