Musical Selection: L.T.D.|Holding On (When Love Is Gone)

Flash Fiction
I didn’t think he’d see me staring at him. I tried to fiddle with the People magazine in my hand — darted my eyes over the cuckoo clock above the Barista’s head.
He spotted me. And I couldn’t backpedal, couldn’t turn away fast enough. He was the color of pre-evening with onyx eyes and a James Earl Jones voice.
My entire body convulsed when he said, “I think you dropped this.” I looked down and he was holding my pen. I had been tackling a crossword puzzle, and the sleek writing tool must’ve escaped my grip when I saw him.
“I, uh … Yes, that’s mine.” I started tripping over my words. What was I doing?! Where was my head? I dragged the pen from his grip.
“I’m Loyal.” He extended his very manicured right hand to me.
“Um … I’m trustworthy.”
He giggled. I heard cherubs singing. I hadn’t caught the humor until he casually said, “No. Loyal is my name. Loyal Manor.”
His hand was still waiting for mine. I slapped it nervously, cupped it, then gave it two quick shakes.
“Oh! Oh! Haha. My apologies. I’m Grace … Grace Baron. It’s nice to meet you, Loyal.”
I glanced over at the Barista, who flawlessly prepares my order daily, and she flashed me a wink.
“Well, I’ll let you get back to your puzzle, Grace. Will you be here tomorrow?”
“WILL I?! I mean … Sure, I’ll be here.”
The dimple in his left cheek made my acquaintance, and I became as giddy as a schoolgirl. Everything about Loyal was smooth as a cup of pour-over coffee, and I wanted to learn more about him.
“Okay, then. I’ll see you tomorrow, Grace Baron.”
“Uh huh. Yes. Yes, you will.”
He turned to exit the building, and I knew it was rude to watch, but I wanted to be sure I wasn’t dreaming.
The Barista tipped her hat in my direction, and flashed me another wink. The server bought me a second cup of coffee and patted my hand. A piece of paper bounced off my knuckles.
There, on a strawberry-scented blueprint piece of stationery, was Loyal’s phone number.
©2022 Tremaine L. Loadholt Originally published in soliloque via Medium.
Chiiillleee, Loyal deserves a series, with his pre-evening self and left-dimple cheek lol
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Haha. How did I know you were going to come up in here asking for a series?! Lol!
And thank you, Kathy.
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Lmao you know I’m your biggest series fan! You shouldn’t do such a fantabulous set up lol
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Haha. Haha. 🙏🏾💙
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“I’m trustworthy.” 😂
Never too old to feel as giddy as a schoolgirl again. Love this!
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Haha. Thank you, Mags! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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🙂
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Loyal is coming through and we are ready! LOL
YAAAASSSSS! I love this story.
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Haha. Haha. I love his name, and the image I have of him in my head.
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Your story is catchy and he reminds me of Lyric! Love this girl.
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💙🖤💜
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🦋🦋🦋 😁
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Ahhh…that old love at first sight 💕.
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Haha. Haha. Pretty much.
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This one made me smile as I remembered giddy feelings of my youth!
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🎉🙌🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
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This is exquisite trE. I love it!
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Thank you, Peter!
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Love it. Way to go Grace Baron.
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Thank you!
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