
Flash Fiction (Challenge Response)
Rufus was the town postman—employed for thirty-six years before he had a heart attack on his route during a blazing hot summer.
Died on the spot.
His manager, Paul Scheltz, had to identify the body, call his wife, and drive the mail truck back to the distribution center. EMS wasted no time hauling his bloated body to the local hospital, where he was officially pronounced dead.
All their potential life-saving efforts stood before them laughing—making fun of the ten minutes they had pumped the man’s chest. He was deader than dead, and there was nothing they could do about it.
Sylvia arrived at the hospital. Her heart weighed a ton. They’d just taken out a second mortgage, and their youngest was about to enter college. All these thoughts raced through her head as she stared at her dead husband—body as stiff as a board.
They buried him underneath the Jane Magnolia tree in their backyard four days later. No other family was there other than her and their three children. No friends except for Paul and his wife. Sylvia sang, “The Old Rugged Cross” while tears waterfall’d upon her face.
“May he rest in peace,” she said afterward.
May he rest in peace.
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This is in response to a challenge request from fellow Simily contributor Rod Gilley where he challenged me by stating the following on my previous post: “I challenge you to write a Flash Fiction (1,000 words or less) on the subject of that tree (any genre). That is a beautiful tree – eager to see what your imagination can come up with for a story about it.”
Originally published via Simily.
Well, dang.
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you have such a way with words and that poor man …. “he was deader than dead” it doesn’t get any more dead than that! 💙🤣
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Haha. Thank you, Krissy. And yeah, he was gone. FrFr. Lol.
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🤣😊
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A tree such as that would suit me very nicely. Not just yet though!
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Haha. I hear you, Peter!
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Almost everyone should be able to rest in peace.
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True. So true.
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Well, as always, you did a wonderful job! ☺️
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Thanks, Kim. He’s new to reading my work, so he had no clue I’d know what “flash fiction” is. Lol.
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Still, to come up with something that good on the spot, just proves you’re a talented writer 🤩
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Aww, thanks, Kim! You’re no stranger to challenges. I have NO DOUBT you could’ve produced something pertinent to his request. 🙏🏾💙
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You are too kind! 🤗💕
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