Enchanted
a mythical presence—
the girl had been
enchanted by the witch …
her curse—she’d live out her
days connected to and unable
to release herself from the
hold of the butterflies.
now, as simple as this
may seem, it is indeed
peculiar. neither the girl
nor the witch had managed
to agree to any terms
more suitable than this, so
here is where the girl stands.
one could say, “the colder weather
will surely free her for those
months,” and you’d be correct
in your thinking, however, these
butterflies have one task and
they will surely see it carried out.
how shall it be then for
the girl to live with a
hold such as this on her?
that is still to be seen.
she looks to the heavens for
some sense of relief—
none comes.
Enchanted was accepted and published for the February prompt at Visual Verse. The image from which to draw inspiration is a captivating one. You can view the poem alongside the image here.
What a great take on the picture prompt, Tre! Your poem and the image remind me of the book One Hundred Years of Solitude, in which one of the characters is accompanied by swarms of yellow butterflies each time he makes an entrance. This brings about the downfall of him and his lover, so it was also a kind of curse.
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Thank you, Mags.
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You’re welcome, my friend.
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Congratulations. Visual Verse is awesome. Your poem holds mystery.
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Thank you, Ali. I appreciate your kindness, and yes, VV is dope!
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Congratulations Tre! This is absolutely beautiful
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Thank you, Bella!
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Captivating poem, trE. Bravo on your publication! 👏🏻
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Thank you! I appreciate that!
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You are welcome.
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Love it Congratulations trE! 💖👏👏👏👏
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Thank you.
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You’re so welcome!! 🙌
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Congratulations, Tre!
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Ah, thanks, Gabriela! I’d submitted every month since November, and this was the first one picked up again. Lol. Their guidelines are totally different from what they were a few years back.
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My pleasure Tre 🌹🌺🌸 Congratulations once again. I’ve never submitted but I know of them. I suspect they have tons of submissions.
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🙏🏾💙
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A powerful analogy for many modern woes!
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Thank you, Peter!
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Oh wow, such intrigue.
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Thank you, Peggy. The image is really good one this month.
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