The Giving Cause: Still, I Grieve . . .

I try to give myself grace,
to lend myself peace, but
thoughts of you stir about
in my head during the witching
hours, and I cannot find comfort.
I don’t know it. It doesn’t come
to my aid.
What more could I have done?
What more could I have given?
I am bone-dry and my heart
breaks every time I think of you.
You . . . my father. my love. my light.
I am walking in darkness–the days
are longer–nights are colder.
Do I still have meaning?
Every day without you is
a stab to my heart–salt to
the wound, but I’m trying.
I’m trying.
I know if you were here, you’d
guide me in your own little way–
you’d create a path for
my weary feet to follow.
I have to look for peace
from the stars. I have to lure
it in from the moon. I have to
search for it around every corner,
and still, I grieve . . .
I grieve . . . and I wish I didn’t
have to.
Thank you to Kim Smyth for allowing me to gift a poem to you. It has helped me too.
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โI have to look for peace from the stars. I have to lure it in from the moonโ is one of the most beautiful things Iโve ever read. Such a lovely work, and gift. ๐
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Thank you kindly, Sun. ๐๐พ
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Reblogged this on CURIOSIDADES NA INTERNET.
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What an amazing idea and gift! These are great.
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Thank you very much, Geoff!
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what a beautiful thing you’re doing and love your poem TrE! ๐
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Thank you kindly, Cindy. Peace and blessings.
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You’re most welcome and thanks! Same to you! ๐ป
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Oh wow!!!!!! What a beautiful gift to Kim๐๐๐๐๐
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Thank you, lady.
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Outstanding verse, Tre. So moving. ๐
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Thank you kindly, Jeff.
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So beautiful. It has helped me too.
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Thank you kindly. I’m happy this is so–connection is a great thing. Perhaps we’ll all gain something from Kim’s request.
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It could have been my request if I’d thought of it. Thanks also to Kim.
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This is so poignant, Tre.
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Thank you, Mags!
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My pleasure, Tre.
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So powerful trE. Well done!
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Thank you kindly, Peter!
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I donโt know what to say. It spoke my truth so loudly, I was crying before I finished the first stanza. Thank you, Tre, for this gift! โบ๏ธ
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Aww, it was not my intention to make you cry, but I am quite happy I’ve conveyed what you asked as a request. *big hugs* You’re so welcome, Kim.
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You are so talented to be able to see what we feel and put the right โwords on a pageโ. Thank you again! ๐
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It’s my pleasure. You’re so welcome. *big hugs*
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What a deeply touching poem, trE. I agree with David–this is an important project, giving a voice to your readers. It’s really the mark of a true poet as well as a compassionate human being. Nicely done, trE. ๐
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Thank you very much, Mike. I’m happy you’re here. Your presence is greatly appreciated.
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You are doing a beautiful, kind thing, trE.
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David
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Thank you, David. It’s really giving me a great deal of joy to be able to do this. It truly is. Peace and blessings.
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