Flash Fiction

A fresh batch of brownies lay on the counter. We sniff the luring scent, slip on our clothes, and rush down the stairs. I’ve got my heart set on the two middle brownies & my sister craves two from the corners. She’s eager to dash from the entrance of our kitchen to the sweet smell of love and hard work.
Our mom outdid herself this time. We both knew it. The fresh scent travels throughout our home and wafts around every corner of every room. My sister looks at me, I look at her — hesitantly; we measure each other up — lingering in our newfound glory. I nod my head toward her and watch her cherub-like face light up. That’s her cue to take a bite.
We sink our teeth into the gooey goodness of chocolate. Every morsel melts in our mouths — we land on a small slice of heaven. The brownies are both chewy and moist and filled with everything we could have possibly dreamed up if anyone were to ask us.
We take another bite in unison — fudge drips on to our fingers. I lick remnants of evidence from my hands and advise my kid sister to do the same. There’s no hiding the fact that we’ve had our share of this exquisite dessert and we will not deny it if asked, but . . .
How could anyone ignore the luring scent of fudge brownies?
*This began as a response to a Twitter BraveWrite prompt. The prompt word was batch. I liked this so much, I decided to expound on it here.
Originally published in The Weekly Knob via Medium.
YES!!! This is so wonderful! And no diss at all intended to Your Beautiful Mother….but my man makes the best brownies on the planet. On any planet anywhere in all of existence!!!! Just sayin’!!! 🤣 Thanks for the absolute joy You just gifted, beautiful Tre!!! And then there’s this whole craving You’ve left me with. Hmmmm. “BILL!!! Brownies, please!!!” 🤣❤️😊
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Lol. It’s not my mom at all, it’s a fiction piece. So, there’s totally no offense.
Lol. Thank you for reading and I’m glad you’ve got someone who can stick their foot in some brownies. You live in Georgia, so I KNOW you KNOW that saying. Lol!
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How funny!!! Tre, I’m 56 years old and was born and raised in GA (although gone for 30 something years!) and have never heard that expression!!! I’m going to introduce it to my area. It’s great!!! Thanks for broadening my world ever more! Huge hugs Your way! ❤️❤️❤️
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Haha. Thank you!
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💖!
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Oh yes! I like the ones where its got some sort of crunchy stuff, I don’t know what it is, but its sweet, with chocolate, and all sorts of sweetness – when it gets a little burnt at the edges, its even nicer! Oh yeas!! 🙂 xx
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Yes to burned edges! Haha. Brownies are delicious. Lol.
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I love the visual! I had two brownies today.. covered in pecan praline… tis the season 😬
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Haha. I bet they were delicious too! Thank you for reading, Kelley!
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definitely
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Everyone will be happy here. I’ll make a batch of brownies.
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Haha. Yay! Please send some our way! Lol!
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I can smell and taste those from across the Ocean.
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Haha. I swear, I want one so badly! Lol.
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