Said blue to the flower, “If I were you,
I’d scatter my petals across the nation–giving
everyone a piece of me.”
The flower looked on, bent its stem,
and scolded blue. “But, you are not
me. You are in the sky, of the ocean,
and the feeling of broken hearts.
I am what people pick when
they want to see a smile on
their loved ones’ faces. I am
fresh pine in the midnight hour,
A statement for a dying soul. I am
lilac & jasmine, clover & rose–the
depth of beauty on a toddler’s fingertips.”
blue listened, eager to understand–yearning
to know just why the flower was so special.
“I am God’s explanation for tears
buried in the sand. You could never be
me, not even if you tried endlessly.”
And with that, blue sat alone with its thoughts.
Its heart beat faster and its eyes grew tired.
The sun tilted its head, leaned over blue’s face,
and lit up its life.
“Maybe I can be the sun,” blue thought.
Beautifully written, trE!
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Thank you, Betty! Welcome back!
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Thank YOU! I’ve been slowly trying to catch up with everyone.
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You take your time. You’re welcome.
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This is possibly the most beautiful piece of writing I read for a very long while.
”“I am God’s explanation for tears
buried in the sand. You could never be
me, not even if you tried endlessly.”
Much love and regard trE.
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Thank you, Petru! I really appreciate that.
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It refers to a colleague of yours wanting to step into your shoes for a day so to know what it feels like to be you. Impossible, of course. Your wish for Blue is sublime.
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💙
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The beauty of flowers and the beauty of your words. I needed to to take a deep breath on finishing your wonderful words…
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Aww, Andi. Thank you kindly.
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Such is life, beautifully and painfully expressed in this poem.
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Thank you!
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If only blue could love itself and focus on being the best version of itself!
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Yes, Mags! That’s the entire premise. Thank you for reading!
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My pleasure!
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Awwww. This is so very lovely, Tre. You brought tears to my eyes. ❤️❤️❤️
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Aww, thank you, Katy. 💙
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My absolute pleasure, Beauty! 💕
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