Mister Brown Goes Insane
An Experiment
Mister Brown lives on the corners of
Trident Avenue & 4th Street.
His rickety walk matches the
pace of a snail.
Reverend Burnham says he can’t
be trusted with the church’s
money anymore.
Something about embezzlement
and buying dope.
I stand on the corner, waiting for
The Man to pick me up for work,
and he glides down his steps
like a ghost on a mission.
I keep my wallet close to me.
He waves, I smile.
I don’t say a word to him,
but I watch him as he tries
to figure out how to get
into his car.
The door swings open,
he pushes his disobedient
body inside — closes it.
I notice the gas cap hasn’t
been closed.
I flag him down, but he’s
up the street quicker than my
hands can flail.
He hits a tree.
Cops come.
Reverend Burnham too.
Said he fell asleep at
the wheel.
Funny, I think.
He looked well-rested
to me.
Originally published in P. S. I Love You via Medium.
The whole scene unfolded so clearly in front of me. Can’t help feeling sorry for Mister Brown, wondering how he turned out this way. Enjoyed listening to your reading, and especially liked your knowing laugh during the last stanza. Good job, Tre.
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Thank you, Mags. I have a soft spot for Mister Brown. I may do a few more poems about him. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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You’re welcome, Tre. I’d like to leaen more about him.
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He’s in my head, I’ll definitely be getting out more. ❤
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Love this one Tre. “Something about embezzlement and buying dope” is my favorite line.
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Thank you. I rather like that line too. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Tre! This is so cool! I love the absolute crispness and cadence of Your voice/read. I decided to only listen instead of reading along and You wonderfully left me hanging there…..wanting more. I actually got chills when I realized that was it. All. Observation/experienced shared. Cheers and Thank You! ❤️
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Thank you, Katy! I am glad you enjoyed it. This is a personal favorite of mine and I am happy to see it being well-received here as well. ❤
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Absolutely my pleasure, Tre! ❤️
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