Lune #18 of 25
sprinkled white wonder
covered roads
red heartbeats as trees
*A lune (rhymes with moon) is a very short poem. It has only three lines. It is similar to a haiku. A haiku has three lines, and it follows a 5/7/5 syllable pattern. The lune’s syllable pattern is 5/3/5. Since the middle line is limited to three syllables, it is often the shortest line of the three. This makes a lune curve a bit like a crescent moon.
For the next twenty-five days, except Saturdays and Sundays, I will share a lune with each of you. This is Lune #18 of this project.
Red heartbeats as trees. Beautiful line!
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Thank you!
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This is perfection in true form!
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Thank you!
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It’s going to snow tomorrow so this is the perfect time to read this!
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Haha. Enjoy the snowball. Agate pictures, please!
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Haha enjoy is a strong word but pictures coming soon!
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Ugh and that was supposed to be “snowfall.” *sighs* Lol. Okay. Yay. I love snow.
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Red heartbeats… nice one, Tre!
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Thank you, Mags! I appreciate you reading.
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With pleasure, Tre.
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Love the photo. Just perfect for the lune.
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Thank you!
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Red-colored leaves mark
Strike contrast
To fresh fallen snow.
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Beautiful! I love this, Kim!
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Thank you, I may have to start my own Lune challenge 😃
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Haha. You’re quite welcome!
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Thank you! I never heard of this type of poem. I like it…and the photo.
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You’re most welcome! It’s a fun form. I enjoy writing lunes. Thank you for stopping by!
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