Lune #15 of 25
at the “high table”
they rejoice–
now, the witch is dead.
*A lune (rhymes with moon) is a very short poem. It has only three lines. It is similar to a haiku. A haiku has three lines, and it follows a 5/7/5 syllable pattern. The lune’s syllable pattern is 5/3/5. Since the middle line is limited to three syllables, it is often the shortest line of the three. This makes a lune curve a bit like a crescent moon.
For the next twenty-five days, except Saturdays and Sundays, I will share a lune with each of you. This is Lune #15 of this project.
I dunno why, but why do I get the sense that this sounds more ominous than it has the right to? *Shivers*
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Haha. Haha. You could be onto something, Tien!
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*dramatic direction – hand clutches at chest, the other on forehead* Oh no!
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A deliciously compact story with my favorite kind of ending: open. I love the lune form; every bit as rich as haiku but less well-known. You’re doing them a great service!
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Thank you! I appreciate you reading and responding. And yes, the lune is a great form. I love it!
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