Lune #12 of 25
forgive me, my love,
let’s make up–
calm these stormy seas.
*A lune (rhymes with moon) is a very short poem. It has only three lines. It is similar to a haiku. A haiku has three lines, and it follows a 5/7/5 syllable pattern. The lune’s syllable pattern is 5/3/5. Since the middle line is limited to three syllables, it is often the shortest line of the three. This makes a lune curve a bit like a crescent moon.
For the next twenty-five days, except Saturdays and Sundays, I will share a lune with each of you. This is Lune #12 of this project.
Ah this is lovely 😍
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Thank you, Dear Heart. I appreciate that.
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❤️😍
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Really enjoyed this! As much as I love longer poems I think something short like this has can be very satisfying #!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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I loved this one, I thought of a reply pretty quickly!
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I see! 😊 Thank you for responding!
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Will you forgive me
My mistake
I forgive you, too.
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Aww, this is really good, Kim!
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