Lune #3 of 25

dear, deer: you frolic
and you play
unabashedly.
*A lune (rhymes with moon) is a very short poem. It has only three lines. It is similar to a haiku. A haiku has three lines, and it follows a 5/7/5 syllable pattern. The lune’s syllable pattern is 5/3/5. Since the middle line is limited to three syllables, it is often the shortest line of the three. This makes a lune curve a bit like a crescent moon.
For the next twenty-five days, except Saturdays and Sundays, I will share a lune with each of you. This is Lune#3 of this project.
Oh deers, watch for cars
Keep to the
Grassy planes and woods!
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Yes, Kim! You did it!
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This deer is not timid!
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Nope! Lol. Most of them are, but they let me get a few pictures. I had to zoom in, though.
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I’m liking your lunes! Are you as challenged by these as I am by Haiku?
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Not really. I love lunes. Thank you!
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oh deer: when it rains,
remember —
you are not reindeer…
😁
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Haha. Funny.
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