The old lady downstairs has cancer
steeping in her bones.
Her daughter walks her dog now.
She greets me with pleasantries and
a brave smile.
I offer moments of wordy goodness
as we cross paths.
Her heart is breaking.
I can hear it.
What it must feel like to watch
your giver of life deteriorate at the
hands of a silent criminal that has killed
millions must be indescribable.
I think she wants to tell me
something, but the words are stuck
behind her tongue.
I never pry.
My next-door neighbor’s fianceé is
cheating on her.
She works 60-hour weeks
and comes home exhausted from
the verbal lashings she combats daily
while dealing with the public.
She tells me that my dog “is
the cutest thing ever” and I compliment
her on her uniform.
She wears it well.
I do not tell her about the dark-haired
woman who holds the hand of
her lover while she’s away.
There’ll be time for that.
And I will not be a part of
that conversation.
The thin walls of our building
will be the teller of all things
and her heart will break too.
My favorite neighbor moved out
of our building about a month ago:
leaky ceiling.
Our neighbor above him had a faulty
toilet.
I miss his freckled face and wispy
red hair that smiled at me
before he did.
I still see him from time to time.
He moved into the building
across the street, but it’s not the same.
He always had a bounty of words
that pressed into my spirit and made
me look forward to his voice.
He was the sun of our sky
and now another set of people
are blessed to feel his light.
I hope they appreciate his
heart as much as we do.
This is a recently rejected poem from a prominent literary magazine. I figured I’d share it here. Thank you in advance for reading. Peace.
I enjoyed reading this. I recently had to endure yet another rejection, so I get it. I’ve yet to have any of my work published by anyone other than myself. I’m probably going to take a break from it.
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It can get a little taxing, truly. I’ve published you 🙂 Ha! That should count for something. But, yes–trust me, I understand. I am waiting to hear from yet another bigtime magazine and it’s been just over 6 weeks, which is their allotment time period. I’ll be contacting them on Wednesday, give them a little more cushion. Thank you for responding!
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I love this so much. It doesn’t matter if it’s true or not. The way you’ve described the characters and created such a beautiful image is everything. Happy writing ❤️
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Thank you kindly. 😊
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Absolutely love this! You are a wonderful storyteller.
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Thank you, Deb!
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They probably didn’t read it – it’s a lovely piece!
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Lol. I’ll take that, Ogden! I know that most of these publications and literary magazines and journals nowadays want to host the bigger names, the people they’re prone to seeing in the poetry section of bookstores. I always gear myself up for rejection now. Thank you!
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The magazine blew it. Love this, Tre. It’s poignant and real in perfect proportions.
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Thank you, Mitch!
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These snippets remind me of the following quote by Brad Meltzer: “Everyone you meet is fighting a battle you know nothing about. Be kind. Always.” Your empathy for those around you comes through loud and clear, Tre.
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Thank you, Mags. I feel connected to my neighbors, you know? The ins and outs of neighboring and all. It’s not always pleasant, but it’s life. 😊
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You’re welcome, Tre. I think it’s a good thing you feel connected to your neighbors. Do you think any of them feel that x
connection too?
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I think a few do.😊 And I am good with that.
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Have a lovely weekend. 😊
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You too, Mag! Check your email when you have time, please.
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Thanks, Tre! I’ve just replied. 🙂
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Yes, ma’am! I am about to read it now. Lol. 😁
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😁💚
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Wow, you really have some keen observations into the lives around you. They all could be the basis of future stories too! I will pray for them to be freed of their awful situations if they only knew how much you cared, that might even help. You are such a good person, Tre.
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Thank you, kindly. *big hugs*
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Loved it trE. I agree ‘they’ are fools for not accepting your poem. 🙂
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Haha! Petru! Thank you kindly!
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You’ve captured the odd connect/ disconnect we can feel with neighbors and the heartbreak of a caregiver so accurately–been there myself as I lost my wife 5 years ago to ovarian cancer.
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Peace and I offer you big hugs and continued healing. Thank you so much for reading.
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Wow! You have truly managed to capture the essence of glimpses into the lives of those around you. The first part caught my attention immediately, for not so long ago, I was that daughter in that very same heartbreaking, gutwrenching position.
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💙 Thank you for reading and for this comment of expression and connection.
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True story?
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Yes, they are little snippets into my life and the lives our my neighbors here in my building. Thank you for reading.
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It’s excellent, and they are fools for rejecting it! 👏👏
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Thank you kindly. I appreciate that. Ha!
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