An advocate for mental health, disability, and chronic illness–she pens her words carefully but manages to add so much strength to them too. She is an active contributor to A Cornered Gurl and is giving our little community lessons in life through words. The poem that I have selected to feature is entitled, “Lines On My Body.” It is an amazing flow of words and ends solidly too. Everything about it makes me happy to be a writer of the genre, poetry. And now, “Lines On My Body.”
Lines On My Body
I want these lines on my body
showing my journey,
expressing my womanhood–
bold patterns of identity
from a feminine hand.
But there is part of me
that shouts don’t do it!
No man will touch you–
(not this man but maybe the next).
No job will have you–
(not this job but maybe others).
So, perhaps, like that poem about
the old lady wearing green shoes
(or was it purple? or red?)
because she finally felt free
to do so — perhaps, like her, I’ll
finally cover myself in the beautiful
images of my life when I’m sixty;
when I don’t need to care about
the bank manager anymore, or
the boyfriend. Maybe then I can say:
I don’t have a photo album or
a Facebook page — don’t need it.
It’s all on me. Part of me. Come.
See me.
Originally published in A Cornered Gurl via Medium.
This is sooooo beautiful!!! Cheers! 🙂
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It truly is a great poem. Thank you for reading!
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My pleasure, completely!!! ❤️
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Wow. TrE, this is so powerful! Your use of paretheses really was effective….made me pause and take it in. Thank you.
Blessings!
Debbie
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Thank you, Debbie. I think she brings so much to the writing world. I appreciate you reading. Peace.
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Lovely. A manifesto of ink. As a tattooist, this poem resonates for me that need to unleash identity and trust it knows the way home. Glad I came across this.
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Thank you very much for stopping by and reading. I am glad you came across it too. I know Lowen will be excited!
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting Roy – I love the concept of “unleash identity and trust it knows its way home.” That is definitely a concept to draw on in the future!
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No worries, I got you. I am editing the comments. Lol. *big hugs*
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Thank you so much for featuring this poem and for your generous words Tre, and thank you to every one for your lovely comments xx
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You are more than welcome, Lowen! It is my pleasure. You move us with your words, lady. You do.
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Excellent!
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Thank you for reading!
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I should be thanking you! But you are welcome. 🙂
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I love it, I had no idea women were tattooed or were tattoo artists so early!
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It’s amazing. I learned quite a bit when I reviewed this piece. It’s truly a gem.
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An assertive, uplifting piece! The ending is solid indeed.
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Yes, Gawd, it truly is! She wows me quite a bit.
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lol *blushes* I feel like I might have to woman up and get started on those tattoos now!
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Haha. Go for it! You’ve got time. *big hugs*
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