Dead Roses
A Collaborative Effort with Barry Dawson IV|Musical Selection: Little Brother Featuring Joe Scudda/Lovin’ It
it is easy to gather roses
for the dead,
words for listeners —
you hide in the shadows, content
on stealing what does not belong
to you.
I have eyes in the back of my head,
protecting what feeds me.
licensing age-old lyrics,
no duplication, B.
if you’re stepping up,
ready for the game,
bring your best uppercut.
I gotta jab and a crazy left hook
gearing up for top lips
and pretty noses.
a cruel business, the world of writing.
your heart is on display —
the hungry come in droves,
salivating for something
fattening.
give’em slim fast,
Ensure, or Pedialyte, but
never ever give them
steak and potatoes.
trying to eat the whole meal
in one bite
instead of the portions
we gave you.
headhunting for
a one-shot KO
will never save you
from your ribcage-rattling,
shook from combos
of famine and body-blows;
still, you try to steal my soul
like your name was Jim Crow.
not one to hide, you open wide
to gulp down the fatty talent,
but leave the conscience
on the platter,
and then get mad at me
when diabetes takes your sight
as if your mad-hatter,
reckless appropriation
had vision to begin with.
I scatter dead roses
at the headstone where we met.
your fat festers, decomposes,
existing as undead,
but I ain’t dead yet
©2019, Barry Dawson IV and Tremaine L. Loadholt. All Rights Reserved
Originally published on Medium via A Cornered Gurl:
*Barry and I have been collaborating for about a decade. If I think it, he can bring it to life. If he starts something, I can usually finish it. We have meshed well for such a long time that I was beyond myself with glee to finally see him get active on Medium. Every time we work together, it is fun to see where we are in our work at that moment. He is a great Writer and a dope fiend.
Indeed the first and last stanzas tie up beautifully. These lines got me where it mattered:
”to gulp down the fatty talent,
but leave the conscience
on the platter,”
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Thank you for reading. We truly appreciate it!
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This was so much fun! Thanks again for building with me, trE. 🙂
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Thank you! Always.
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Freestyle Board all over again!
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Haha. Yes! “Uknowhowwedu.” 😊
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Ah yes… Freestyle Board… I miss the cyphers we had over there. My being invited to the “Triumph” collaboration remains a crowning achievement for me. I felt like Hall & Oates on stage with all their heroes from Motown.
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I love this! An excellent analogy delivered with sass and dry wit. The two of you have tied together the beginning and ending for maximum impact.
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Thank you, Mags! Thank you!
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An absolute pleasure, Tre. 💙💛
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