“the type of weather
that forces me to miss you
greeted me this morning”
I love this beginning, Tre! It immediately sets the tone and the imagery. There is no escaping.
“the colder side
of my bed
knows this too”
And this? Heavenly! It’s my favourite line! I cannot NOT feel the melancholia. Beautifully written! Thank you for sharing, Milady!
This is lovely. Love your way with words in this.
Pat R
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Thank you.
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heartfelt truth in words, wonderful even through the sadness it weaves ❤
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Thank you, Kim.
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Love this. Reminds me of a favorite song
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Thank you, love. Which song? If you don’t mind me asking.
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The one I told you about the other day by Lana
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Ahh. The one you shared with me?! Yes! It’s such a beautiful song. “Summertime Sadness,” I think. And now, it’s stuck in my head again. 😁
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Your poem is as beautiful
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❤ Thank you, Candice. That's very sweet of you.
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“the type of weather
that forces me to miss you
greeted me this morning”
I love this beginning, Tre! It immediately sets the tone and the imagery. There is no escaping.
“the colder side
of my bed
knows this too”
And this? Heavenly! It’s my favourite line! I cannot NOT feel the melancholia. Beautifully written! Thank you for sharing, Milady!
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Hey, you! Thank you very much, Tien!
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Tre… this is beautiful, sad, and though it reads as a confessional I really dig the voice here.
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Thank you, Barry. 💙
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Sad… xo
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This really tugs at the heartstrings, Tre.
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💙
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beautiful
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Thank you, kelley.
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trE ❤
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Good morning/Afternoon, Ogden. Happy Sunday. *big hugs*
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Yes, and to you too! 😀 😀 XX
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Thank you!
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