Inspired by Din Daa Daa by George Kranz
I am a child
watching you rip
through bass
snap snare — a dancing machine
volume on high
rhythmic robot
I think —
I want to be
music too.
Originally published via Medium.
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A Cornered Gurl 
Genius last three lines
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*nods* Thank you.
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Great ending.
I think —
I want to be
music too.
Me too! I want to join the dance.
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Thank you, Ali! I appreciate your kind words.
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Love the two phrases “rip through bass” and “snap snare”. Lovely piece, Tre
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Thank you, Tien.
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That’s SOOOO rockin’!!! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Absolutely! 🙂
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Love the rhythm!
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Thank you, Mags!
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You’re welcome, Tre.
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Great accompaniment to the breaking pic!
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Thank you, Patty. 😊
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