One-Lined Poem: Feast or Famine 07/20/201807/20/2018trE Courtesy of spdmngtruper/DeviantArt he feasted on the blood of her swollen heart– bearing his soul as proof of desire: no one would know that he killed her. Share this?EmailWhatsAppFacebookLinkedInTwitterPinterestTelegramMoreTumblrLike Loading... Related
My pleasure… although this kind of situation is never a pleasure to be in and I hope it’s not your case… LikeLiked by 1 person
Glad to hear that… as often we write after experience I got a doubt… 🤗🤗🤗 LikeLiked by 1 person
I absolutely LOVE your choice of the phrase “swollen heart”. Speaks so much of her love for him and he devours it all. And “his soul as proof of desire” just tops it off nicely. Fits right into the title. Lovely! LikeLiked by 1 person
Another piece about heart-devouring… yikes! 😉
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Haha. Yup. I’m getting it outta my system. Lol.
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A much better idea than suppressing it. 😉
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Yes, ma’am.
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Love this! It was like a one line horror movie!
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Haha. Thank you! I’m glad you like it!
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I really did and you’re very welcome!
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😊
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…. sounds like a narcissistic behaviour…
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And you are incredibly correct. Thank you for reading and responding.
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My pleasure… although this kind of situation is never a pleasure to be in and I hope it’s not your case…
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No, ma’am. It’s a fictional-based micropoetic piece.
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Glad to hear that… as often we write after experience I got a doubt…
🤗🤗🤗
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Understood. 😊
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He sounds rather dangerous, Tre…
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Oh, but he is. Also, he’s totally made up. At least, I hope so.
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I try to keep away from those toxic types. Glad yours isn’t ‘factual’…
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Smart woman. 😊
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This is incredible to me!
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Well now, I’m happy to read this! Thank you, Pragal!
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Most welcome Tre 🙂
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Gave me goosebumps.
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😊
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I absolutely LOVE your choice of the phrase “swollen heart”. Speaks so much of her love for him and he devours it all. And “his soul as proof of desire” just tops it off nicely. Fits right into the title. Lovely!
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Thank you, Tien… Thank you. *big hugs*
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Oh my.
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