This month’s Visual Verse prompt is a titillating one. From just one glance at the photo, so many scenarios came to me, but I settled on one that just would not stop bopping about in my head. It is entitled “Rewind.” I will post a snippet of it here and then direct you to the poem in its entirety toward the end of this post. There’s still time if you want to submit for this month’s prompt. Writers, make it happen. Use that creativity of yours and get on it, doggone it.
Rewind
She pressed PLAY and watched him
sit back casually, dreaming
of better days.
Her hair, pinned up, her eyes–
faithful to his stare.
She was a golden arc, welcoming
his entrance.
FAST FORWARD to their wedding day
and the two of them had no reason
to STOP
Every dream was finally coming true.
Or so they thought.
Her first attempt at making him
a father, her, a mother, failed.
That’s what the doctor called it,
“a failed attempt.”
And the second, and the third.
And every breath she took
felt like the last.
As always, many thanks to Visual Verse and to those of you reading. I truly appreciate you stopping by. For the rest of the poem, please go here.
Peace and blessings.
Tears in my eyes, Tre. Wonderful.
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Hello, Lisa. Thank you very much for reading.
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This is so beautiful and sad. I love it
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Thank you.
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That’s really unique…
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Thank you for reading.
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Such hope and euphoria, followed by an endless loop of despair.
This is particularly poignant:
“How could he EJECT
them from this life?
He did not know.
He wished he did.”
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Thank you, Mags. 💙
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My pleasure, Tre. 💚
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“she was a golden arc” beautiful beautiful line. How do you come up with this? I really sighed at this line… And my heart was squeezed by this line “every breath she took
felt like the last”. So much pain packed into this one.
Thanks for sharing, Tre
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Thank you for reading, Tien. Always. 😊
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What a unique expression of the prompt! The entire story did ‘Play’ in my mind 🙂
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Pragal, thank you very much. I’m glad you enjoyed it. It’s a grim subject matter, I know.
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You are very welcome. Yes I agree and such subjects of life become what keep playing – forward and rewind about the possibilities.
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