I can feel how painful this was. I remember doing that too, trying to meet a bar someone else set. Good news is that I stumbled upon my strength, and was strong enough to walk away from it. Love you trE. Another awesome poem hit the mark.
“in a blink of an eye, / I become your exhume treasure” and the stanza
“instead, you watched me
drown in my own tears, struggling
to be more for you”
really speaks to me. Powerful words, Tre, powerful words.
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Nice BLOG!!!
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Thank you kindly.
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I can feel how painful this was. I remember doing that too, trying to meet a bar someone else set. Good news is that I stumbled upon my strength, and was strong enough to walk away from it. Love you trE. Another awesome poem hit the mark.
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Thank you, Deb. Love you too. I hope you’re well. 😚
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You express such a feeling of helplessness through this piece, Tre. Sad yet beautiful.
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I did feel helpless. I still do. Thank you, Mags. I appreciate your words. Always.
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You’re welcome, Tre.
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you always know how to wring the most emotion out of your words my friend, I felt this to the core. Nice work as you always seem to do ❤
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Thank you, Kim. Thank you. 💙
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“in a blink of an eye, / I become your exhume treasure” and the stanza
“instead, you watched me
drown in my own tears, struggling
to be more for you”
really speaks to me. Powerful words, Tre, powerful words.
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Thank you, Tien. Thank you.
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Beautiful and so powerful!
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Thank you
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… so deep… so true and sad…
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It can be, very sad. Peace to you.
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Thank you… to you too and much light!
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You’re most welcome. Thank you.
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Sad stuff… xo
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Really gorgeously written.
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Hey, lovely one. Thank you. I appreciate that.
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You earn it with your talent 💓
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💙
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Wow I can feel the truth here. The entire poem is deeply beautifully done and the last 5 lines really spoke to me.
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I’m there a connection was made, Pragal. I thank you very much for reading.
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Always a pleasure dear Tre.
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