Or, What Love Looks Like On Eager Lips
love left us thirsty —
cherries popped in
the back seat of a minivan
shaky fingers and
plum-scented lips.
satiated by a
fountain of
YOU
filling an aching belly.
hunger
annihilated.
Originally published on October 14, 2017, via Medium.
Cherries popped, innocence gone – haha. The feeling of young, adolescent love emanates from your words.
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Thank you, Mags. That was my intention. I’m glad it was picked up and noticed. 😊
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You’re most welcome, Tre. 🙂
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💙
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Nicely done.
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Thank you, sir.
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You did it again. Or before. But at least a few times! Reminds me of being a teenager in love for sure! Yes too hot here to go outside to cool off too! Nice works trE.
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Thank you, Deb! Stay cool, if you can. We’re going to reach about 84 degrees here today. Too hot for me.
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Here too but they usually lie. 86 predicted so it will be 90, I’m pretty sure!
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Yeah, we won’t see 90 degrees here, thankfully. It’ll probably get that hot here in mid-to-late July. I am not looking forward to it!
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Wonderful. Going outside to cool off. *fans face*
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Lol. I’m sorry. It’s a little older. Haha. It’s too hot here too go outside and cool off. 😊
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Don’t apologise. It was great! It’s 6 degrees Celsius here at the moment. I’ll be back to normal in no time lol!
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Haha! Haha! Ahh… Well now, enjoy that as much as you can. ❤
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Love the choice for the final word 😀 ❤
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Thank you, Ogden! I appreciate that!
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Very well done 😀
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Thank you, again.
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