she leaned in,
lips pursed and pulsating
temptress in heels
s a n c t i f i e d s i n
pools of pain swarm
her heartless mouth
a storm rages at the bottom
of her soul
years of giving
basic love to anyone
in her realm
has caught up with her
there is nowhere to run
Wow trE! I totally get it. Catches up with one, sooner or later. Learning discernment, I guess. Beautiful!!
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Discernment, yes! Thank you, Deb.
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Wow, “sanctified sin” trE, you are a master with words.
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Whoa! Thank you for your kind words, Manuel.
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My absolute pleasure trE
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The pain of being trapped. There is so much tension in this one. Well done trE.
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Thank you, Ali.
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Wow!!! Cheers! 🙂
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*bearhugs*
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HEEEEYYY! Best hugs on the planet! *big hugs*
Thanks for stopping by!
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She may end up drowning in her own pools of pain. You’ve expressed her desperation and despair so eloquently, Tre.
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Thank you, Mags.
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You’re welcome, Tre.
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It reminded me of the “night women” as my Grams called them, spreading their love yet slowly dying within as they gave themselves away for a few meager bucks….sad and a part of life I wish wasn’t necessary. That is if I’m interpreting what you wrote correctly in my mind 🙂
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Actually, no. I am simply speaking of women who yearn to be loved, yet do not know how to give more than basic love to others. They are giving the minimum at best, yet expecting the maximum. But, I can see why you’d think I’d be speaking about prostitutes in this one. 🙂
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yes, I can see that point of view now too ❤ hugs and smiles 🙂
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🙂
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sanctified sin… just exquisite.
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Thanks, Barry. 😊
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Beautiful!!
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Hello, Pragal. Thank you.
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That word came instantly Tre 🙂 I read again and that’s all I felt like saying.
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You’re so sweet, Pragal. Really. Thank you, again.
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You are very welcome.
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Passion!!!!!
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You think so? I think I can see some passion here.
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Definitely. But then … You ARE a truly passionate person so it is in most that you write.
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Understood. Thank you for reading.
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ALWAYS 💓
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“there is no where to run”..oh Tre!
This is so hearfelt, I could hardly breathe.
Wow!
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Hey, you. Thank you for your kind words. I am kind of attached to this one.
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And I feel this intensely
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