Strength is uncommon
Now
It manifests in
Presumptuous ways, claiming
To feed your tortured soul
Yet you lose inches
Of a dying heart
To an ill-fated diagnosis
That the world’s most
Renown devotees of medicine
Pencil in on a chart
You become the medical
Term
Instead of a human being
You become the thing
Fading
Before them, but they
Still think you are alive.
You haven’t been
In years.
a dark and sad place to be, so gut wrenchingly put out there as only you can ❤ ❤ ❤
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Peace, Kim. Thank you for reading.
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I meant to comment on this when you wrote it and see I didn’t. Excellent writing my friend. So timely and powerful.
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Thank you and that’s okay, you’re commenting now. 😊
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Really great work my talented friend
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💙
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deep and evocative…pain beautifully penned
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Thank you, Neha. Your comment was in Spam… I just retrieved it. I appreciate you reading.
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You’re welcome and this is the second time it had happened, someone just told me the same yesterday…wp is acting up again!
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It’s a mess. A mess.
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Lord. You made me cry. I have watched this. We all have, I reckon. You captured it. ❤️
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It’s a heartbreaker if you truly care/love someone… knowing they’re suffering and you’re helpless is a bad rabbit hole. Thank you for reading. Peace and blessings.
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It certainly is a bad rabbit hole. And coming here is always my pleasure. Peace and blessings to You as well. 🙂
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Thank you. 😊
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To become a thing with the soul stuck inside it, shrivelling from lack of nourishment…what a poignant piece, Tre.
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From illness, from the somewhat dying of insides…
Thank you, Mags. *gives you a big hug*
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((((hugs))))
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heavy heavy
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Thank you, kelley for taking the time to read this one and respond. And, btw, my best friend loves her gift!
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Right on! Thanks to you both.
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You’re most welcome!
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