Damon has his hands full. Last night consisted of tossing and turning uncontrollably. Linda refused him their bed. Another heated argument landed him a night on the couch. A common theme in their home. He has lost his sense of self. He doesn’t know who he is and cannot remember who he was. Since the voices entered his head, he was changing.
He carries a bowl of cereal, a mug of coffee, and the weight of his unforgiving heart on his shoulders. He struggles as he makes his way to the family room. Today, he will apologize.
Linda is combing her dully colored hair. Damon said the highlights looked like they were torturing her scalp. She’d spent three hours and $85.00 at the salon, yearning for perfection.
“Everything I do, I do for him.”
She mumbles excuses for her reactionary behavior while glancing at her tired reflection in the mirror. She belittled Damon for his momentary outbursts, unwilling to see his progress. Today, she will end the suffering.
The hardwood floors of their Victorian home creak under the pressure of heavy feet. Both of them pace in place, struggling to keep their anger sealed. Their therapist advised in the last session, “Let go of what does not matter. Embrace what does.” The walls whisper sound advice, in the frozen foyer, Damon hears them:
“Love or lose. Win no more.”
He races up the stairs, bursts into their bedroom, and lunges towards his wife. He catches her moments before she kills herself.
This is the first time the voices in his head are right.
Wow! Totally different for you! Shocked me but I liked it! Though, I wasn’t sure if she died or not but even that, the not knowing, is cool. You let us decide for ourselves. Very nice!!
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Actually, I don’t share a lot of these stories here. I share them mostly on Medium, but I will be sharing more of them here. Thank you for reading, Deb! *big hugs*
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wow and double wow, nice work Tre ❤
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Wow, Tre. What a powerful ending. This is still echoing in my head: “This is the first time the voices in his head are right.”
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Hey, Mags! Thank you!
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You’re welcome, Tre. 🙂
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That was amazing. Wow. You’ve such a cool style of writing. At first I wasn’t certain what I’d fallen into when I entered this post! I thought You were talking about someone You knew and were just telling us about them. But it was so poetic and I got sucked into the story. Love how You tell so much with so few words. An entire history in that short piece is completely understood. I agree with the first commenter who said she was glad it ended well!!!! Cheers! 🙂
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Thank you.
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My pleasure, always!
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Nice
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Your writings are always fascinating and brilliant.❤️
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Hey, there! Thank you, MVS. *big hugs*
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Hey, I was just wondering if my comments are visible on your older posts?
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Yes, ma’am. They await moderation. 🙂 I always get your comments. ❤
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Oh. ❤️
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I agree with Linda, raising awareness of this helps save lives. Your piece could do that. If we all had the courage to write about things the stigma would be gone. This is very powerful my friend – you really nailed it.
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Hey, you. Thank you for reading.
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ALWAYS 💓
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Amazing piece. Mental illness is serious and when someone else is in the situation, it makes it even harder. Thankfully Damon was able to understand that there’s no winners or losers in love…only winners and lessons!
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Very true. I’m glad he gathered a bit of awareness to stop Linda. Thank you for reading. 😊
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The image and words work perfectly together. Bravo!
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Thank you, Peggy!
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Wow! I actually got chills reading this! Bravo 🙂
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Thank you kindly!
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Thats a great piece of writing tre!
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Ogden, thank you very much!
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Omg! Wow! I am glad it ended well. Tre you make it all very real while reading, amazing!
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Pragal, thank you for reading. This just came bouncing in my head moments before I posted it. I found an image that I thought suited it best. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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You are very welcome 🙂 Yes, some of them come very well designed and perfect without a notice too much in advance …you have a real art of description in you.
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Pragal, this means a great deal to me. Thank you.
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Always welcome.
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