Blind Reality (An Audio Poem)
as the dust gathers
in your eyes, you
flick it with the tip
of your finger,
pressing its grittiness onto
the bridge of your nose.
blinded by daybreak
a cause for concern
in the dank, deserted, and
dreaded domain of a
commoner’s heart, you
swim effortlessly,
milking the need.
once lost, now found–
a deluge of pain seeps in
reminding us that reality
is a dream and waits
patiently for its turn to
make an appearance.
and like magic
we abracadabra the honey-scented
calmness of a blazing breeze
drifting
drifting
drifting
like lost lovers do.
always such a joy to hear that lovely voice of yours my friend, beautiful as always ā¤
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Thank you, Kim. You were spammed. I guess WordPress had forgotten about you a little bit. I didn’t, though. *big hugs*
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beautiful!
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Thank you.
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Tre, the reading of this… your voice brings a beautiful, haunting vibe to the words. There is a texture here… I can feel the words, as well as hear and see them. Impressive work. š
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Hey, Barry! Thank you very much!
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Gorgeous!!!! WOW! š
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Thank you, really. š
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Lovely TRE, hope you’re having a good Val day ā¤
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Thank you, Ogden. I am having a splendid evening. I truly hope you are. š
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So beautiful, Tre. Especially this āhoney-scented calmness of a blazing breeze.ā
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Thank you, Lisa. š
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I listened to you read it, then read it myself. Yes I agree that your imagery is superb. You evoke the emotion, it is at once extraordinary and common, because we have all felt it, but you were able to put it to words. Thank you trE for the beautiful read.
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Thank you, Deb, for listening and reading. š
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Valiant is right, your imagery here is GORGEOUS
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Hey, there. Thank you very much. š
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Ah, the pleasure is mine, reading YOU.
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*big hugs*
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The imagery in this piece reminds me of Salvador Daliās paintings. A strong, assertive reading, Tre!
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Mags, wow! Thank you, love .
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You’re welcome.
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Mags, let me know if you can see this response, please. WordPress is tripping.
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Yes, I can. šš
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Haha. Okay, good. Thank you!
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The sound is actually the essence dear.
Superb!
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Thank you, MVS. I wanted to make the sure the file was clear. š
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Your imagery is flawless as always!
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Hey, you! Thank you! Could you hear the audio okay?
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